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Stitched_RedString

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Aslan II
(you)
Iorek Byrnison
(you)
King Edmund Pevensie
(you)
Lucy Pevensie
(you)
Queen Susan Pevensie
(you)
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Chapter , Scene 1 Act Ⅰ, Scene 1

Iorek, a Son of Adam, is walking along the snowy path from his house to The Lantern Waste, a favorite spot of his for a picnic, when he encounters a cloaked young man to his left, walking in the opposite direction. Winter is almost over, but this person was dressed in a long coat of….fur? Quite similar to those that the Royals had in Cair Paravel.

Iorek Byrnison
Iorek Byrnison (youStitched_RedString) moved

I was walking to the Lantern Waste for a small picnic, and to enjoy some music. When I stumbled upon a lifted tree root. “HA HA, very funny Jeral!” I yelled at the tree as it laughed. And not looking where I was going, I tripped over my drapes and fell into the arms of the passing stranger, and looking into his hood, I saw… King Edmund? I quickly righted myself, blushing like mad, and I bowed. “My majesty”, I said quickly “ I apologize, I wasn’t looking where I was going.” I stammered. My heart beat fast from the surprise. Damned Jeral, always trying to trip everyone who walks by. As if it wasn’t enough that he was a Willow.

King Edmund Pevensie
King Edmund Pevensie (youJaspericorn) moved

I had noticed the stranger only moments before he fell into my arms on my way back from a rather unsuccessful hunt, “No need to apologize, stranger.” I replied, helping the other to stand back up. “And it’s quite alright, please, no need to bow.”

“I don’t believe we’ve met before and, as you clearly know me, you have me at a disadvantage.”

Iorek Byrnison
Iorek Byrnison (youStitched_RedString) moved

“Nonetheless I apologize,” Sebastian said as he kept his eyes on the ground. “I was on my way to The Lantern Waste for a picnic.” I said quietly, “Can I offer you a pastry on your way?” He said as he dug his heel into the thin layer of snow. His face still red.

King Edmund Pevensie
King Edmund Pevensie (youJaspericorn) moved

“It is the perfect weather for a picnic. Then again, there are few days that aren’t in Narnia.” I tried to relieve the awkward feeling that hung in the air.

“A pastry would be lovely. Thank you… um…” I realized I still had not gathered the others name.

Iorek Byrnison
Iorek Byrnison (youStitched_RedString) moved

Sebastian lifted the lid of the picnic basket and picked out a clear bag, within it was 3 pastries, a chocolate croissant, a raspberry muffin, and a little mint cookie. The top was tied off with a small lavender ribbon.”I was saving these for a small party I am hosting this evening, but I have plenty to give out. So please take one!” he offered it out and dropped it into the Kings hand. The red subsided from his cheeks.”Oh! Forgive me, I have yet to introduce myself.” He said with a smile. “My name is Sebastian AL Byrnison, but my friends call me AL.” That is if I had any friends he thought, he was hosting the evening party in hopes of meeting a partner there, how can he attend the spring ball if he doesn’t have a partner? He continued to bow, “A pleasure to meet you in person your majesty.” He stood up quickly saying “But I really must be on my way!” and attempted to speed walk away. All the while cursing Jeral the Willlow for embarrassing him.

King Edmund Pevensie
King Edmund Pevensie (youJaspericorn) moved

“Well, thank you AL and the pleasure was all mine.” I replied, taking the pastry. I hesitated, watching him leave.

I turned to make my way back to my horse, enjoying the pastry as I went. I couldn’t help but wonder if I would see him again. Perhaps at the ball. Couldn’t say balls were my favorite part of royalty, but perhaps someone to get to know or remeet would improve the nature of it.

Iorek Byrnison
Iorek Byrnison (youStitched_RedString) moved

Sebastian hurried towards Lantern Waste and enjoyed his picnic and book. Upon finishing his provisions, he ran home to ready his house for the party. He set out scented candles, and hung beautiful lanterns, strung toule and streamers between them, and set flowers at the center of the tables. He set out the tea and coffee, the cakes and other pastries he baked, and set on peeling some potatoes when the doorbell rang. Opening the door he found his first visitors. The party went on from there, AL played his flute, and they danced, sang, played games, and ate merrily. The party was almost over…

King Edmund Pevensie
King Edmund Pevensie (youJaspericorn) moved

The day had been passing by mostly uneventful and my mind had seemed almost fixated on the pastry in the mundanity of it all. All through a round of chess against Susan, throughout a wander around the grounds with Peter, and all through out a ride to the near by towns as if the pastry held the key to something nagging at the back of my mind.

Something that refused to become apparent until the day had leaned quite a bit later: hadn’t the other mentioned a party of some sort? That was right. Well, that was certainly something. Perhaps I could bring something to make up for the pastry he had taken earlier. Wasn’t there a delightful tray of biscuits left over from dinner?

I rushed for the tray and hurried towards where I had run into Sebastian first, imagining I could simply ask for directions from there.

Impressively, that did work and I found myself at the entrance to the party with a tray of biscuits.

Iorek Byrnison
Iorek Byrnison (youStitched_RedString) moved

The doorbell rang. “My,” Sebastian said, “whoever could that be at such an hour?” quickly making his way over to the door, He looked through the peephole to see the one person he would have NEVER expected to arrive. ‘How did he know about the part?’ Sebastian ran to his room to ready himself, not looking as gay and messy he ran to the door. Then it hit him. He must have let slip during their run-in in the enchanted wood. Taking a deep breath, fixing his hair once more, and brushing himself down, he slowly opened the door. “King Edmund.” he said flatly with a bow. “Welcome, what brings you around my neck of the woods?”

Queen Susan Pevensie
Queen Susan Pevensie (youDrucellia) moved

There was nothing quite as breathtakingly beautiful as Narnia after a fresh snowfall. Everything was covered in soft white snow and flecks of color shone through. Birds were chirping above and a light breeze rustled the leaves causing flakes to fall to the ground revealing the deep green of the evergreens beneath. Only a few clouds slowly floated by in the sky and the forest floor felt still and peaceful.

Susan smiled as she walked leaving a trail of prints in the snow behind her. These were the mornings that she enjoyed the most, so full of beauty and solitude. She felt a sense of security here that she had never felt elsewhere and tried her best to take any moment she could to soak it up.

It was long before Susan came to the pond of wonders, at least that’s what she liked to call it. In the summer it was every shade of purple and blue and pink you could ever imagine. Now, it was frozen into a deep blue that reminded her of the sunset back home. A tall tree stood near the bank and even in the winter, its leaves were a deep violet. She sat leaning against its trunk thinking about her siblings and how far they’d come.

Commentary

Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
@jaspericorn [delete]
11/05/2022
Jaspericorn (narrator) (host) (You):
Sorry, I'll have a move done before Monday. [delete]
11/05/2022
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
Don't worry about it. Take your time! [delete]
11/05/2022
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
*cricket noises* [delete]
12/06/2022
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
Sorry I haven't been on lately, my little sister has been in the hospital. [delete]
01/26/2023
Jaspericorn (narrator) (host) (You):
I had work earlier today, but I'll make a move tomorrow morning. [delete]
03/15/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
Would you mind 'Stopping in' at AL's party? I would be nice if AL had a partner to go to the ball with. ;) [delete]
03/20/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
it would. [delete]
03/20/2023
Jaspericorn (narrator) (host) (You):
I can absolutely do that [delete]
03/20/2023
Jaspericorn (narrator) (host) (You):
I will have to make my move tomorrow tho, today was busy. [delete]
03/21/2023
Drucellia (narrator) (host) (You):
We are writing in first person? Or third? [delete]
03/22/2023
Drucellia (narrator) (host) (You):
Also, just trying to get a bearing on the story and where they are.... Do Iorek, Kin Edmond, and Queen Susan know each other, are they related like in the books? Also, want to make sure I get where we at rn... Iorek and Ed are having a picnic and who is Sebastian? [delete]
03/22/2023
Drucellia (narrator) (host) (You):
I may have Susan on a walk in the woods and could come across the two... [delete]
03/22/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
great! [delete]
03/23/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
I am planning on switching it to third. Sebastian is the name Iorek goes by, (Iorek is his dead name) I am planning on sharing that around the time Aslan arrives in the story. And yes, the Kings and queens are all brother and sister, make sure to check out the character cards in the greenroom. [delete]
03/23/2023
Drucellia (narrator) (host) (You):
What's the plan for this chapter? Is this party the end goal? [delete]
03/29/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
Well, while I'm recruiting more people, the plan is to continue this chapter, were Edmund invites Sebastian as his plus one/partner for the ball. Susan is also on the lookout for a partner and runs into Sebastian, she asks Sebastian to ber plus one/partner as well. Edmund and Susan fight over me while i cry in a corner and... We're just going to try and make it up as we go. I fixed it to open submissions, so if you both can spread the message around so we can get more players, the better. Thank You! [delete]
03/29/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
*ber is be her, sorry for the misspelling. [delete]
03/29/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
lol (~TvT)~ [delete]
03/29/2023
Drucellia (narrator) (host) (You):
Okay.... So Susan is currently sitting by a pond... If someone wants to run into her and we can talk about the party? [delete]
03/29/2023
Drucellia (narrator) (host) (You):
Did you make a post in the forums? I can also advertise in the newsletter for you [delete]
03/29/2023
Stitched_RedString (narrator) (host) (You):
I would appreciate that, thank you! [delete]
03/29/2023
Jaspericorn (narrator) (host) (You):
Working on a move. Just may take me a few days to get it done. [delete]
04/08/2023
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