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For a few terrifying moments, everything was dark. But slowly, the heroes’ vision returned.
What they saw wasn’t much more comforting, but sight was sight, at least.
Several of the bandits before them lay dead, now, killed by the force of the explosion or by rocks scattered about. Others, though…others were changed.
Magic, Westly could have explained had he had the time to do so before the event, was an unstable thing. It took focus and caution to craft it into usable forms and make it work for you, properly, without errors. Killing the mage at the critical moment had stopped the portal, true, and very likely saved Akakios…but it had let loose wild magic, and those closest to it, the bandits, were warped in the process.
Those who had lived were twisted, misshapen beings now, stretched and distorted. They turned their horrible, malformed visages at the heroes and screamed, a mix of rage and hate and pain. Their weapons, swords, spears, axes…all were elongated, bent at odd angles, but sharp and dangerous all the same.
One in the midst of the explosion, though, appeared unchanged. Lycus, the one-eyed bandit lord, was still human. or was he?
The empty socket of his missing eye was filled, now, filled with a sickly purple glow. As the heroes watched, glowing cracks started to form across his face, all originating from the eye.
“What…what did you do to me?” Lycus asked, stumbling as he put one hand to his face. “What…what is this…I see?”
He raised his sword, and a trail of the purplish light followed it…but soon, the trail widened, opening like a hole in reality.
Lycus smiled, and started to laugh. “I understand. I understand…yes. You’ve given me a gift!”
He slashed the air, and tore a hole in reality…and jumped in.
A split second later, Westly cried out in pain as Lycus’ boot connected with his face. Westly fell to the ground, dazed, and Tirian quickly turned to lunge for Lycus - only for the bandit lord to slash the air once more and jump through the rift to emerge back by his misshapen allies.
“Yes…yes, quite a gift,” he said. “I can use this. But first…” He pointed with his sword, and laughed. “Kill them.”
The misshapen bandits charged, and Lycus, growing more confident by the moment, launched himself into the battle once more.
This is the final scene, everyone, and the final set of challenges. I hope that you’ve enjoyed Defenders of Akakios, and if any of you still have questions regarding the Storium system, please feel free to ask me here or in the Green Room.
Tirian had heard about tragic deformations caused by wild magic before, but had never seen it in person, and to have a group of bandits affected by it was a whole new thing. If they were allowed to escape they would terrorize the land and cause fear to spread throughout all of the villages in the area. Moreover it would be known that he was the one who had released these horrors onto the land, for bandits were not known to keep secrets of where their loot, or in this case their deformation and enhancement, came from. He would have to do better in the future. But for now he had to focus on defeating the rouges or else he would fail his main focus as a ranger, namely to protect the meek and incapable, to help those in need and let no harm come to the innocent. It was time to get to work.
He moved towards the main group of bandits but before he could reach them a small group of them broke off and began to circle around the rocks over the top of the cave towards the rest of his team. He looked over to see Kiana making sure Westley was okay, Aeryn chanting spells possibly in an attempt to keep Lycus from teleporting more but he could not be sure, and Nimblescrum keeping a close eye on he bandit lord most likely to discern if he would be the next target of an unblockable attack. Tirian realized they would most likely be caught off guard if he didn’t do something to warm them. He had to decide quickly weather to attempt to slay the bandit lord before he could utilize his newfound abilities even though it could cost his friends dearly, or help them and maybe lose an opportunity to end the fight before it really began.
Nimblescrum took the moment to lift a smooth, grey stone from the ground where he had fallen and throw it at one of the lumbering, twisted bandits nearest him. It struck the creature in the temple, causing it to turn and bellow with rage.
And with that, the nimble and half-height thief ran away.
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Nimblescrum looked to the heavens, and then shrugged.
“Eh. fuggit,” he mumbled.
Nimblescrum snapped out of it and returned to the fray. Something had welled up within him… a new and righteous indignation.
He unfurled his leather roll-up and produced a short sword. With a growl surprising for a being of his frame, the thief sprang forward toward the first bandit– the one he had struck with a stone only moments before.
The bandit turned in time for ‘Scrum’s blade to sever his femoral artery, at the exposed point of his inner thigh, spied keenly through the bandit’s shredded garments.
The other bandits were likewise vulnerable, an unintended effect of the twisted magic having broken clasps and links holding armor and basic covering firm. They seemed to become aware of this at once, looking down at their tattered gear and then up again at the raging halfling.
When the thief’s blade hamstrung the second bandit, the rest of the heroes took notice. The unexpected rally had come from the most unlikely hero in the group, but it mattered not. Like a rising tide, the band of heroes lifted their weapons and rushed the bandits, their voices piercing the air. The battle lasted less than five minutes, and when the cries dropped and the breath was heaved, the bandits lay in bloody piles about the woods.
In front of the group stood the bandit leader Lycus still, his visage grim and determination steely.
“Come on now!” shouted the thief to the group. “We’re nearly there! Don’t give up now!”
Tirian was surprised by the outburst of heroism by Nimble, moreover he was ashamed of letting a thief take the first action towards riding the land of these bandits.
He had frozen. At the critical moment he had let his team down, and left a small town pickpocket to bring up the slack. It would NEVER happen again. HE, would be the one to end Lycus.
He stepped out in front of the leader of the outlaws.
“Come on now!” He shouted at the deformed man, “Let’s finish this! Just you and me!”
Lycus laughed, “What? HAH! That’s ritch. A single ranger thinks he can defeat me? I could squash you before I had these powers!”
And with that Lycus quickly cut another portal and before Tirian could even bring his knives from his belt he was knocked to the ground by a powerful blow.
He lay there for a moment, the wind knocked from his lungs, then quickly rolled to the side to avoid being impaled by Lycus’s broadsword. He got to one knee then drew his daggers just in time to ward off a blow from the bandit lord. He got to his feet and took a step back.
“You see?” taunted his opponent, “you can’t hope to beat me! I will just keep coming after you until you lie dead at my feet!”
Tirian readied himself for another bout.
“Face me without your cheap tricks Lycus! Then we’ll see who is lying where!”
With that Tirian rushed at Lycus, blades held high. The bandit sidestepped and deflected Tirians blow, the ranger spun around and tried to slash at the legs, hoping to catch Lycus off guard. But the ruffian was to quick, he brought up his foot, kicking the dagger out of Tirians right hand.
Tirian took a quick step back and threw the blade from his forearm sheath, but that too Lycus deflected without descernable effort.
“No cheap tricks huh?” scoffed Lycus, “What would you expect from an outlaw?”
He tore another rift with his sword and appeared behind Tirian. Before the ranger could react Lycus grabbed him by his collar and hurled him towards the rest of the group.
Tirian landed heavily at the feet of the other heroes, Westly quickly bent down to help him up.
“You can’t beat him alone! What were you thinking?” asked the young spellcaster.
Lycus gaffawed. “You people are so pitiful! Why do you even fight?”
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Lycus seemed to grow in power in the final moments of the struggle, thrown into some kind of arrogant rage. The band of heroes struggled to hold him back, but a win looked unlikely. In one dark moment, Lycus hauled back and laughed.
“I could do this all day!” He mocked. “Who will I butcher first…”
The bandit lord spied the cowering Westly and advanced on him, laughing. In a flurry of motions, Westly desperately tried to stop Lycus in any way possible, throwing every spell he could remember at the towering figure.
In one final motion, the boy mage was able to halt Lycus in a raised death-blow, but it looked as if he wouldn’t be able to hold him for long. The color had drained from Westly’s face and his hand began to waver when a sound like a toy drum being thumped echoed through the woods.
Lycus’ eyes glazed over and the bandit lord dropped to the ground, unconscious. Behind him, Nimblescrum lowered a rubber mallet and grinned. Westly collapsed in a heap, his own magical abilities permanently drained.
Nimblescrum shook his head. “He will never be able to cast spells again,” he said.
The thief reached down and lifted the chainmail cap from Lycus’ head and placed it carefully in his leather roll-up.
“My job, I believe… is done here,” he said, patting the bag. “I think I’ve collected enough bits and bobs to please my employer back in the city. Look for high-quality replicas being manufactured and sold soon where you purchase your fashionable items! Not everyone has to be a hero to dress like one.” Nimblescrum headed in the direction of the village. “Questware. Designer gear at affordable prices. Don’t forget the name now.”
And with that, he was gone.
It had come at a cost…but at long last, the defenders of Akakios had won the day. The bandit army was bested, the misshapen creatures some had become would trouble the land no more, and the bandit lord Lycus himself was captive.
Nimblescrum had disappeared, having taken the items that he’d been looking for. Tirian, Aeryn, and Kiana returned to Akakios, taking with them the drained Westly and the captive bandit lord. They made as quick a time as they could - even though the bandit army’s plan with the portal had been foiled, they knew they could not afford to delay in case the army should otherwise attack the village.
As they came upon Akakios, they thought for a moment they were too late. The bandit army was indeed attacking, swarming about the city’s hastily-built fencing and facing off against its recently recruited guards.
But Akakios was holding. The bandit attack was disorganized and uncertain, lacking the power and ferocity of the earlier assault. It was clear. It was meant as a distraction, the main assault intended as the portal spell the heroes had managed to stop.
Even as the heroes drew near, the morale of the bandit forces was beginning to fade. Where was their leader? Where was the attack that was supposed to break the village’s defenses in one moment?
The heroes snuck back into the village by the path they’d used to leave, and soon, the bandits had their answer.
Their leader was in the village of Akakios, but not the way he’d desired. He was stood at the edge of the defenses, bound, a captive of the village he’d intended to capture himself.
Emotions flickered across the faces of the bandit army. Disbelief. Fear. How could these few have conquered them? How could things have turned against them?
If the bandits had still all chosen to work together, perhaps it would not have mattered. Perhaps Akakios would still have fallen, and a bandit lord would rule the region, his power spreading, enhanced by the chaotic magic he held within.
But…one emotion mattered above all others, in that moment. Greed.
It was greed that drove the bandits. Greed, and the ambition to be in control. Lycus had been their unifying force, the one man who could through sheer personality, sheer willpower, get the different bandit factions to work together and serve him and him alone.
With him beaten, the bandits lost the bond that held them together. Lycus was no longer the strong force that connected them, that held their respect.
He was weak.
And why should they follow the weak?
Especially when each of them might be able to take his place?
For a brief moment, then, it seemed as though there might be one final charge. One unified moment where the bandits took Akakios despite all the heroes had accomplished.
But then…one faction turned and left, without a word.
It broke the floodgates. Soon, more and more of the bandits were withdrawing, each group in a different direction. Some stood - some thought to stay, more loyal to Lycus than others, but in the end, they were far too few.
Slowly, even they drifted off into the forests again, and soon, no bandits remained to threaten the people of Akakios.
A cheer went up from the villagers and their heroes. The threat was over.
The days ahead were hard for the people of Akakios. So many had lost so much - not only among the villagers, but among their heroes as well. But…Akakios had been built once by strong hands willing to survive on the outer reaches of the kingdom, and if more strong hands and willing hearts had to rebuild it…that was just what they would do.
The bandits, though, never became as great a threat again. Lycus had been unique, a force of personality that could unify what could not be unified. No other person had been able to take his place. After the dispersal of the army, and after a few struggles amongst themselves where no one group could prove the better, the bandits finally returned to being the small, disparate bands they once were - still perhaps a trouble on the roads, but never again a true threat to the people of Akakios itself.
Lycus was tried under kingdom law, and ultimately delivered to the Royal Academy of Magic as the only safe prison for him, given his newfound power. There, they would try to find a way to restore the humanity he was losing - not perhaps out of any humanitarian sense, mind, but more to prevent him from ultimately becoming too great a threat to contain.
Westly, too, went to the Academy…perhaps there, they could find a way to restore his lost power. If not, there was always a place for one with a good head for magic as a researcher and scribe, even if he could no longer use magic himself.
As for the others…each went a separate way, seeking out their own goals, forging their own legends.
But no matter what happened, no matter where they went, each would always be remembered by one small village on the kingdom border, where the villagers would always speak with fond remembrance of the day that brave heroes rose to save them in their darkest hour. For generations to come, those days would never be forgotten.
I hope that you have enjoyed Defenders of Akakios, and I thank you for letting me introduce you to Storium. If you’ve decided that you would like to continue playing games on Storium, I encourage you to frequent the Looking for Players forums, where new games are often advertised, and to take advantage of the Browse Games list, where one of the tabs includes games that currently have openings.
If you have any remaining questions about the Storium system, please do feel free to still contact me. I believe I’ve mentioned them before, but the Resources page, the Storium Arc podcast, and my own Storium Theory blog posts over at Gaming Creatively all also explore elements of the Storium system if you are curious about them. I hope that they can provide you with any further insight that you might need.
And, of course, if you’re interested in running your own games in Storium, I encourage you to give it a shot! I’ve got a number of articles over on Gaming Creatively that explore narration, and there’s plenty of narrators on the forums who are willing to take a look at questions you might have about running the game. Everyone has their own style, so if it’s something that interests you, take some time, figure out your style, and go for it.
Once again, thank you, and wherever you go from here, may you have fun telling stories.
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